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I Long for the touch of another against me
Of lying next to each other just lying there
I long for the love like that, just wanting to be together forever
I long for life to be like that

But next to me is an empty space
emotionless, hugging a pillow won't take its place
Next to me is a lonely face, a mirror looking back at me
Next to me is loneliness, pure, misguided, loneliness

All i want is someone to hug
but im too scared to even touch
Im to sad, for anothers touch
I'm sorry this sucks, this doesn't rhyme and this doesn't matter. But its what im feeling right now at this very moment. I know, i am too young to be feeling like this, but i am so your argument is invalid.

On a lighter note: I was given the idea of this from... hugging... and smiling at my pillow, yes i have lost it.
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MyLifeIsRiggs's avatar
You're wrong. Some of the best poetry doesn't rhyme at all. This is full of emotion, and is relatable to everyone in the world at some point. Kudos ^^

You're too young? haha I wrote half of my stuff at around 13. You're never too young for this.